Comments on: Draft of Essay #1 Due Wednesday, 9/13

By: prof Groom

prof Groom — Wed, 13 Sep 2006 04:41:52 +0000

Rachel,
The latter. You can easily fold the ideas you discussed for the undergraduate education into similar concepts that define a liberal arts education. Also keep in mind that you are using this earlier writing assignment as a point of departure. The ideas you harvest from your earlier work should by no means limit your development of a larger, more robust examination of the liberal arts experience in light of Percy\’s essay for this assignment.

By: Rachel Lee

Rachel Lee — Wed, 13 Sep 2006 04:23:37 +0000

Professor Groom,
If I did my images to represent the undergradudat college experience instead of specifically a liberal arts experience, what should I do? should I start all over and find symbols of liberal arts college experience or do this new process with the symbols that I have which just represents the general undergrad experience?

By: prof Groom

prof Groom — Wed, 13 Sep 2006 04:01:00 +0000

I placed Allison\’s first essay in double brackets within the Alison Crerie page and it created a new (red) link to a new page. I then cut and pasted your text into the new page I created -did you do something similar with varying results?

By: Allison Crerie

Allison Crerie — Wed, 13 Sep 2006 03:50:00 +0000

My essay shows up on the page when you first click on “Allison Crerie” on the wiki homepage. I thought I did the “Allison C’s First Essay” thing, but I guess I didnt. How do I go back and label it?

By: prof Groom

prof Groom — Tue, 12 Sep 2006 19:54:47 +0000

Sam,

Excellent point, here is how we can fix this issue: put your name in front of the First essay page – for examples instead of writing First essay, write Sam\\\\\\\’s first essay – does this make sense? What is happening is that Kelly created the first essay page and now it seems the wiki is acknowledging this as her page alone, so each of you have to distinguish it by placing your name in from of the the first essay title.

By: Sam DiPaola

Sam DiPaola — Tue, 12 Sep 2006 19:46:24 +0000

Professor Groom,

I went into the Wiki to form my new page for the “first essay,” and when I created the new page under my name, Kelly Key’s essay was there. I went into edit and pasted in my blog entry there, edited it, etc. However, now, when you go into Kelly’s page, my essay is there too. How do I fix this? Thanks!

Sam DiPaola